Abseiling
By Aidan
I take a deep breath and begin my ascent ,I can hear encouraging remarks from below. I act confident but
the worms in my stomach squirm like
never before.I breath deeply but the abhorrent feeling
settles over me.
My heart pounds it’s prisons walls.
How did I get myself into this mess? I was at the top.
my lungs splutter to a stop, my brain reminds me of all
that could go wrong.
I climbed down like an inexperienced Dog- which is to say badly. As soon as my feet touch the ground my mind functions properly. Phew!
I like your use of vocabulary.
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